“Wanna Play Marbles” up on Hotel Masticadores House

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Thank you, Juan! I enjoy collaborating with Nolcha Fox on poems!

Nolcha and I have done marathon collaborations. One of us composes a verse on Google Drive and shares it with the other. She uses regular font and I, italics. We go back and forth until we feel the poem is completed. We each revise as needed.

This process has taught me a great deal about the writing process. Usually I belabor my poems. I tend to write longer poems which need a lot of revision. Also, my topics can get heavy, such as the grief work I did to complete “Three-Penny Memories: A Poetic Memoir”, which is about my mother, who had Alzheimer’s. Because I had to help Mom, my uncle asked me if I loved her. This question triggered the deep self-examination that the book explores. Was I helping her out of love or out of obligation? In this book my soul is bared.

On the other hand, with Nolcha Fox, I’ve learned how to express topics related to grief, loss, and aging in light-hearted and clever verses. I’ve learned to trust my skills as a poet and not cling to the verses I write – or the emotions explored. Magically, we now have a book!

I hope you enjoy the poem!

12 responses to ““Wanna Play Marbles” up on Hotel Masticadores House”

  1. byngnigel Avatar

    It was a lovely collaboration. Playful, thoughtful, reflective.
    I like the concept.. I have tried it with stories, but.nevr poetry. Well done. 🙏

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      Thank you so much, Nigel! 🌹

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  3. Dawn Pisturino Avatar

    You two never cease to amaze. A delightful poem!

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      Aw, thanks, Dawn! We definitely have fun!

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  4. Pkmundo Avatar
    Pkmundo

    Genial 💯

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      Thank you!

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  5. pk MUNDO 🌍 Avatar

    💯💚

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      Thanks!! Glad you liked it, pk!

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  6. Miriam Costa Avatar

    THATS NICE

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      Thank you, Miriam!

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