Thank you, Michelle Ayon Nanvajas, for publishing my poem “Hey, Siri” on Hotel today! And I really appreciate your interpretation, which is spot on. I know it takes extra time to comment on an author’s piece, and I am grateful.
“Barbara vividly captures a sense of disorientation and struggle in the face of modern life’s chaos and personal turmoil. The imagery of tripping on black holes and dodging potatoes as asteroids conveys a surreal and fragmented experience, while the references to deceit, diseased air, and choked memories suggest a deep sense of disillusionment. The concluding lines poignantly express a feeling of helplessness and stagnation, highlighting the disconnect between internal strife and external reality.”
The opening lines of this short poem are visible in this link. Please continue to Hotel Masticadores House to read the rest of the poem. Thank you!
Extraordinary Sunshine Weaver 
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