“Pain Will Do That” Published on Collaborature

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A Rengay collaboration penned by Nolcha Fox, Melissa Lemay, and me, has been published on Collaborature. Thank you, Melissa Lemay, for featuring our work!

Here are the first three stanzas.

Pain Will Do that

pain is the perfect weight loss plan
food tastes bitter
even cheesecake makes me flee

holding a pen too long—
my wrists ask me for Ibuprofen

if I could, I’d challenge pain to a duel
my titanium joints, my weapons
I’m a cyborg, pain, get ready! .........

Follow the link below to read the rest of the Rengay poem.

https://collaborature.blogspot.com/2025/08/pain-will-do-that-nf-ml-bl.html

21 responses to ““Pain Will Do That” Published on Collaborature”

  1. Ephemeral Encounters Avatar

    Congratulations on your publication Barbara
    It is a wonderful rengay.👏👏
    ” but those bees, those stinging bees” love it!

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      We enjoy writing Rengay poems together. Thank you, Maggie! Glad you liked that line!

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      1. Ephemeral Encounters Avatar

        Hi Barbara
        Truly my pleasure.
        Have a lovely weekend.

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      2. Meelosmom Avatar

        You, too!

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      3. Ephemeral Encounters Avatar

        Thank you Barbara

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  2. T. W. Dittmer Avatar

    Congratulations, Barbara! Your marvelous poetry is very meaningful.

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      Thank you, Tim! I appreciate your visits to this blog.

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  3. crazy4yarn2 Avatar
    crazy4yarn2

    Yay, us! Thanks for posting this, Barb!

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      My pleasure, Nolcha!

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  4. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    A great poem about pain. I’ll send you the blurb next week.

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      Thank you, Robbie! How wonderful! The book production is going faster than expected. 💃🏼💃🏼💃🏼

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      1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

        💛

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  5. Lauren Scott, Author Avatar

    I loved this poem, Barbara, and the topic resonates too. Congrats! 💞

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      Thank you so much! ♥️

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  6. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    Oh this one is so relatable, Barbara! Love it! 😍

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      Thank you, Cindy!

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      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

        You’re so welcome, Barbara!! 🩷

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  7. Dawn Pisturino Avatar

    Excellent, as always!

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      So glad you like it, Dawn!

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  8. Carol anne Avatar

    This is a brilliant rengay Barbara congrats on being published ❤

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    1. Meelosmom Avatar

      Thanks so much!

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