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Reclamation
A stretch of river he paddles
smothers from impenetrable vines
spiky buds of the invasive hops stare
from the brisling mats of leaves
hungry alien intruders
ravage, over run
steal sun, suffocate, shroud
saplings and wildflowers
with dense tangles. Turbulent
flood waters thrust
into the dense plumage
with violent twists, wrench
the miscreant from the banks
there lays bare a pristine meadow
disrobed of a weighted corset
she gasps
catches her breath
from shock of sun
sparkles in her wet dirt, saplings emerge
with curious caution
dance with daisy fleabane,
ragwort, lush grass
depleted deer tread lightly
on her floral spring frock.
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Barbara Leonhard is a writer, poet, and blogger at Extraordinary Sunshine Weaver. Her podcast Poetry: The Memoir of the Soul explores universal themes such as Grief, Kindness, and Presence. She taught writing for many years at the University of Missouri and is the author of
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Congratulations. 🙂 You paint a vivid scene.
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Thank you, Ken!
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Congrats! This is an amazing piece with such evocative and colorful imagery. It’s stunning and enthralling.
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Thank you so much, Lucy!
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VERY good! Focused, to the point. I like the meadow, freed of her corset and beginning to bloom. Good alliteration.
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Thank you for reader impressions!
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