This poem is included in an article I wrote for Phoebe, MD: Medicine + Poetry (https://phoebemd.com/2020/03/12/fire-ice-the-faces-of-grief/).
The article is based on my poetry podcast Grief: Fire and Ice, which features this poem (https://meelosmom.podbean.com/e/grief-fire-and-ice/).
Before Eden Fell
We were all immortal,
our beauty, captured forever
in flora and fauna
so brilliant that light itself
had to blink twice
our true being stood naked
without shame
our reflection more lustrous
than knowing
brilliantine fabric
until the apple fell
into Mother’s soft hands
our Mother, the first to grieve
her garden lost
how she still clings to the maiden
the stunning beauty she once was
now deflowered, exposed to erosion
our Eden, our innocence and purity,
victim to change, to corruption, to decline,
our undoing
no one …. no thing is our eternity
our heaven forever
on this plane
nothing lasts
so we grieve
feeling abandoned by joy
and cast out of a divine place
though we cling to the fading innocence
of our Eden,
we bless grief
Written in Response to Robert Frost, “Nothing Gold Can Stay”
Nothing Gold Can Stay
BY ROBERT FROST
Nature’s first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf’s a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief,
So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay.
**Poetry Foundation
My poem ends with, “We bless grief”. Why? I explain in my podcast. 😇
©2020 Barbara Harris Leonhard
extraordinarysunshineweaver.wordpress.com
meelosmom@podbean.com (Poetry: The Memoir of the Soul)
Image: Pixabay
Like this:
Like Loading...
Hmm. Possibly this might have been better, it might have been more fortunate if this had been in Genesis rather than the Creation Story.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! I’ll look into that.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Chris, I wrote this poem in the context of grief for a podcast I did on my mother’s Alzheimer’s. https://extraordinarysunshineweaver.blog/2020/01/26/grief-fire-and-ice/ .
Also, I don’t know what you mean by “more fortunate if”.
LikeLiked by 1 person