Before Eden Fell

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This poem is included in an article I wrote for Phoebe, MD: Medicine + Poetry (https://phoebemd.com/2020/03/12/fire-ice-the-faces-of-grief/).

The article is based on my poetry podcast Grief: Fire and Ice, which features this poem (https://meelosmom.podbean.com/e/grief-fire-and-ice/).

Before Eden Fell

We were all immortal,

our beauty, captured forever

in flora and fauna

so brilliant that light itself

had to blink twice

our true being stood naked

without shame

our reflection more lustrous

than knowing

brilliantine fabric

until the apple fell

into Mother’s soft hands

our Mother, the first to grieve

her garden lost

how she still clings to the maiden

the stunning beauty she once was

now deflowered, exposed to erosion

our Eden, our innocence and purity,

victim to change, to corruption, to decline,

our undoing

no one …. no thing is our eternity

our heaven forever

on this plane

nothing lasts

so we grieve

feeling abandoned by joy

and cast out of a divine place

though we cling to the fading innocence

of our Eden,

we bless grief

Written in Response to Robert Frost, “Nothing Gold Can Stay”

Nothing Gold Can Stay

BY ROBERT FROST

Nature’s first green is gold,

Her hardest hue to hold.

Her early leaf’s a flower;

But only so an hour.

Then leaf subsides to leaf.

So Eden sank to grief,

So dawn goes down to day.

Nothing gold can stay.

**Poetry Foundation

My poem ends with, “We bless grief”. Why? I explain in my podcast. 😇

©2020 Barbara Harris Leonhard

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meelosmom@podbean.com (Poetry: The Memoir of the Soul)

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3 responses to “Before Eden Fell”

  1. st33mpunk Avatar

    Hmm. Possibly this might have been better, it might have been more fortunate if this had been in Genesis rather than the Creation Story.

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    1. extraordinarysunshineweaver Avatar

      Thank you! I’ll look into that.

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      1. extraordinarysunshineweaver Avatar

        Chris, I wrote this poem in the context of grief for a podcast I did on my mother’s Alzheimer’s. https://extraordinarysunshineweaver.blog/2020/01/26/grief-fire-and-ice/ .
        Also, I don’t know what you mean by “more fortunate if”.

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